Remember


 The only thing that matters now is my mission, nothing will stand in my way anymore.

When I was younger I used to write poetry all the time, I even had an empty book that I wrote all of them in... one day I lost it and with it I lost my desire to write anymore poems.  It took me another 25 years plus to write anything again... I think it was the hardest post for me to publish, next to my post about being raped.  I have written sporadic poetry over the past year, it is always difficult to hit publish... maybe because it can be taken so many ways and basically they are just words from my heart. 

This was a poem I wrote many years ago...



Remember
 
When I remember all the memories we had
I remember the good times not the bad
Life was so wonderful way back when
Where did it go, I think about it time and again.

I'll always remember the time we shared and how I felt
One caress and a look from you eyes made my heart melt
Your eyes they mesmerized me
Where could that love we had be?

Many times I wonder what broke us apart
I've looked through my mind and felt with my heart
There was no reason that I could see
Maybe we didn't try or was it just me?

Now we're apart and on our own
Be happy with her, I'm glad you're not alone
So, when you remember all the memories we had
Like me Baby, remember the good times and not the bad.

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♥«´¨`•°..Launna ..°•´¨`»♥
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41 comments :

  1. Very nice poem, Launna. It is so heartfelt and filled with emotion. I'm glad you remember the good times.

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    1. Thank you Daisy, I have changed it a number of times over the years... and yes it is full of all my emotions :)

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  2. beautiful poem maim Launna. It is true in nature that once unity is destined to apart but departing away against the will and wish gives pain!

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    1. Thank you Sangay, it is so true... there is pain either way ...

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  3. Very nice poem ;)
    On my blog today - studs, jeans and checkered ;)

    Have a nice day ;)

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  4. All the best for your future Launna, full of joy <3
    Xxx

    Carolina

    www.the-world-c.blogspot.com

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  5. Great words Launna, you are very talented!!!
    It's always a pleasure to read your posts!!!
    Have a lovely day!

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    1. Awe, thank you so much Paola, you are always so kind, have a wonderful day :)

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  6. What a lovely poem Launna. Sweet but sad all at the same time. It's like remembering the past but still moving on in the future.

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    1. Thank Rum Punch... that is exactly what I was trying to get across :-/

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  7. you are very talented at writing,the poem is wonderful.i was never creative enough to write poems and stories :)

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    1. Thank you Sammie... writing has always been in my heart ;-)

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  8. Bonito poema!!!
    Saludos
    http://judithbysucre.blogspot.com.es

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  9. Dear Launna,
    It's very beautiful. I think you should give poetry more time and focus your creativity on it. You have a great skill that not everyone does and you should make it grow.

    Hugs and kisses

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  10. Those quotes are so lovely. It's all very true.

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  11. Poetry is such a personal thing, and it can be difficult to share it, especially the ones that bare your soul. For me, it's much easier to share a humorous poem. So good for you! Your poem is lovely and heartfelt. Never apologize for your feelings.

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    1. Thank you Susan...I really appreciate your comment ;-)

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  12. the poem you have written is wonderful and touching ... full of pictures and imagination ... and melancholy. i believe this would be a nice songtext. thank you for sharing dear

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    1. Thank you dk... I never thought about that... my poem as a song... interesting ;-)

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  13. Gracias por tu visita y comentario en mi blog.
    Te sigo en Bloglovin y CFG.
    Saludos

    http://judithbysucre.blogspot.com.es

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  14. Beautiful. It is hard to let people see such a vulnerable side of oneself.

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    1. Thank you Kc... it's never easy to ne vunerable :-/

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    1. Thank you Andie, I would love to visit your blog :-)

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  16. What a beautiful poem! You are one talented lady!

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